Wednesday, August 6, 2025

scene 38

scene 37

INT. HORSE BARN/TACK ROOM - DAY

Rudimentary and clean. The six horses in their respective stalls, eating hay. Saddles on their respective racks. Mechanical bull in a corner. View through open doors to corral.  Chloe, Tom, Jackie, Sess and Claire watch Hunter using a pen to write a note on the front endsheet of Foglost then hand the book to Claire, the pen to Sess..

CLAIRE: Thank you so much, Hunter.

HUNTER:  Very happy to, Claire. 

CLAIRE: I can already see his smile.

HUNTER:  I have a three-hour layover in Oklahoma City October six if your dad might like to meet for lunch.

CLAIRE: Oh my God I know he would.

HUNTER: I'll forward the details through Jack.

Claire nods happily.

SESS: Straight home to Cruces?

JACKIE:  No. River walk in Rui, dinner in gordo, White Sands sunset.

SESS: Send a pic.

JACKIE: Will do.

SESS: Anybody want a coffee for the road.

HUNTER: I'll take one.

TOM: I'll second that.

SESS: Alright then.

All except Hunter walk to the door. Hunter gets a rope coiled on a hook in the tack area, walks it to the group at the door. 

HUNTER (TO TOM): When's the last time you tied a honda knot?

TOM: Well, couldn't tell ya exactly but it's been awhile.

HUNTER: So long that you might've forgotten how?

TOM: I reckon not quite that long.

Hunter presents the rope, Tom takes it.

Jackie, Chloe, Sess and Claire aim their phones to record. Tom looks at the rope as he runs it through his hands, then quickly creates a honda knot and lasso that he hangs on a post. Hunter claps, CHORAL YAY from the group.

CHLOE: Now lasso something, cowboy.

Tom gets the lasso from the post, leads the group toward the mechanical bull, widening the lasso, then swinging it above his head. The group hurries ahead of him for better camera angles. Jackie and Hunter look at each other, Jackie winks, Hunter gives a subtle thumbs-up. 

TOM: Now like I said, it's been awhile.

Tom stops fifteen feet away from the bull, lets the lasso fly. It lands like a bullseye around the bulls horns. CHORAL WHOOP AND HOLLER. Hunter nods vigorously, claps his hands loudly above his head. Tom smiles, tips his hat. All except Chloe pocket their phones to applaud. Chloe continues to record, using optical zoom to close in on Tom's growing smile and the tear that escapes to roll down a cheek. 

silly interlude 1: Yi 1: what does the pool scene add

 






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scene 37

scene 36

EXT. JOHN AND JAN'S POOL - DAY

John in Hawaiian-print trunks and Jan in one-piece swimsuit, both with sunglasses, on their backs on their respective floats. Occasional FAINT SPARROW SONG throughout..

JAN: Did you tell me where they're staying?

JOHN: I don't remember doing so. The Teton club.

JAN: Nice. Do we know where the wedding is?

JOHN: Wilson.

JAN: And the bride is who to Eldredge?

JOHN: Grandniece. Did I tell you they're selling and leaving Chicago?

JAN: If you did, I don't recall. I hope I would remember something like that.

JOHN: I'm sure I didn't. 

JAN: Selling and moving where?

JOHN: Capistrano or San Clemente.

JAN: Really?

JOHN: They're tired of the winters.

JAN: Well, I'm a little surprised it took so long.

JOHN: Waiting for his grandson to finish high school.

JAN: Ah. That rings a bell. Time frame?

JOHN: ASAP but no rush. 

JAN: Train visits.

JOHN: Yep.

A long pause.

JAN/JOHN: Have you visited Wanda's blog?

They smile.

JAN/JOHN: You first.

JAN: The most recent, about their friend Clem's passing. And I clicked on a random date in May and found an entry about a visit to friends with horses near Sheridan. I'm going to stop there for now. I feel like I'm eavesdropping somehow, as silly as that sounds.

JOHN: The same. And with the random clicks on two entries. One a year ago about Ruth's visit to Laramie, and another about members of their square dance group in the Cheyenne Days parade.

JAN: Square dance.

JOHN: Replete with festive attire.

JAN: Have you ever do-si-doed?

A puase.

JOHN: Junior high Sadie Hawkins Day.

JAN: Who asked you to dance?

JOHN (TWO BEATS): Maureen Doyle.

JAN: Can you describe Maureen Doyle?

JOHN: Two inches taller than me, slender. Auburn hair in a ponytail tied by a red ribbon. Green eyes, slight overbite, and a smile she held her hand over to hide her prominent two front teeth.  Blue jeans, cowgirl boots, gingham blouse. We'd been in school together since fourth grade.

JAN: And talked?

JOHN: Never. Infrequent nods in passing in the hallway. 

JAN: How did the evening end?

A long pause.

JOHN: We talked over ice cream at a picnic table near hay bales. We set a date to meet at a basketball game the following week.

JAN: And.

JOHN: Her dad picked her up after the dance. Her dad picked her up after the dance and they were both killed on the way home when a drunk driver hit them head on trying to pass a car on a blind curve.

She looks at John, sees the tears, takes his hand.