Thursday, July 24, 2025

scene 29

scene 28

INT. GREAT ROOM - DAY

Limestone floor and fireplace surround. Archway to hall. Leather furniture includes arrangements aimed at fireplace and wall-mounted TV. Longhorn steers above fireplace, flanked by two whitetail buck shoulder mounts on each side. Mini-fridge and bar, pool table, and Gil in chair near lampstand at big window to oak and Ashe Juniper woods. He's reading Foglost. turns page before MARIA, 40ish - sandals, faded jeans, t-shirt with BROWNSVILLE GYRL across front - arrives in archway.

MARIA: Knock knock.

GIL: Who's there?

MARIA: Ida

GIL: Ida who?

MARIA: Ida forgotten Tom and Wanda are here if I hadn't seen it on the calendar.

GIL: Change in itinerary. Tom arrives tomorrow, Wanda's staying home to be with a friend whose husband recently passed. 

MARIA: Oh. Where'd the boys go?

GIL: Treehouse.

MARIA: That didn't take long.

GIL: No time for grampa.

MARIA: Oh stop it. All they talked about on the way up was getting it done to make you proud.

GIL: Really?

MARIA: Really. Whatcha readin'?

Gil shows her the book.

MARIA (CONT.) Your guy.

GIL: Just out. 

MARIA: What's H C looking like these days?

Gil shows her the about the author flap.

MARIA (CONT.): Damn. Even handsomer. Organ Mountains. Right?

GIL: Looks like. 

MARIA: What's it about?  

GIL: A Houston attorney whose drinking has killed his marriage and is ruining his health and career takes a leave of absence, buys a boat, sails out of Galveston, encounters a freak fog event. I'm where he's bumped into something in the middle of the night.

Maria gets phine from pocket, hands it to Gil.  

MARIA:It chirped.

GIL: Where was it?

MARIA: Garage.

He turns on phone, stares at something, looks at Maria, hands her phone. She stares at a photo of Tom and Hunter looking at the camera from where they stand at Hunter's back yard stone wall, Organ Mountains behind them. 

MARIA (CONT.): That author flap, please. 

He opens Foglost to the flap, Maria compares the images, looks at Gil, hands him phone. He closes book.

GIL: I'll have to let Tom elaborate.     

MARIA: Can't wait. When are they coming over?

GIL:  Saturday.

MARIA: Tamales?

Gil nods. Maria leaves, stops in archway, turns to Gil.

MARIA: Kinda big?

Gil nods, Maria nods, leaves into hall. Gil compares the picture on his phone with the author page, puts phone on lampstand, resumes reading.