Wednesday, August 6, 2025

scene 37

scene 36

EXT. JOHN AND JAN'S POOL - DAY

John in Hawaiian-print trunks and Jan in one-piece swimsuit, both with sunglasses, on their backs on their respective floats. Occasional FAINT SPARROW SONG throughout..

JAN: Did you tell me where they're staying?

JOHN: I don't remember doing so. The Teton club.

JAN: Nice. Do we know where the wedding is?

JOHN: Wilson.

JAN: And the bride is who to Eldredge?

JOHN: Grandniece. Did I tell you they're selling and leaving Chicago?

JAN: If you did, I don't recall. I hope I would remember something like that.

JOHN: I'm sure I didn't. 

JAN: Selling and moving where?

JOHN: Capistrano or San Clemente.

JAN: Really?

JOHN: They're tired of the winters.

JAN: Well, I'm a little surprised it took so long.

JOHN: Waiting for his grandson to finish high school.

JAN: Ah. That rings a bell. Time frame?

JOHN: ASAP but no rush. 

JAN: Train visits.

JOHN: Yep.

A long pause.

JAN/JOHN: Have you visited Wanda's blog?

They smile.

JAN/JOHN: You first.

JAN: The most recent, about their friend Clem's passing. And I clicked on a random date in May and found an entry about a visit to friends with horses near Sheridan. I'm going to stop there for now. I feel like I'm eavesdropping somehow, as silly as that sounds.

JOHN: The same. And with the random clicks on two entries. One a year ago about Ruth's visit to Laramie, and another about members of their square dance group in the Cheyenne Days parade.

JAN: Square dance.

JOHN: Replete with festive attire.

JAN: Have you ever do-si-doed?

A puase.

JOHN: Junior high Sadie Hawkins Day.

JAN: Who asked you to dance?

JOHN (TWO BEATS): Maureen Doyle.

JAN: Can you describe Maureen Doyle?

JOHN: Two inches taller than me, slender. Auburn hair in a ponytail tied by a red ribbon. Green eyes, slight overbite, and a smile she held her hand over to hide her prominent two front teeth.  Blue jeans, cowgirl boots, gingham blouse. We'd been in school together since fourth grade.

JAN: And talked?

JOHN: Never. Infrequent nods in passing in the hallway. 

JAN: How did the evening end?

A long pause.

JOHN: We talked over ice cream at a picnic table near hay bales. We set a date to meet at a basketball game the following week.

JAN: And.

JOHN: Her dad picked her up after the dance. Her dad picked her up after the dance and they were both killed on the way home when a drunk driver hit them head on trying to pass a car on a blind curve.

She looks at John, sees the tears, takes his hand.

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