Friday, July 18, 2025

scene 22

scene 21

EXT. HUNTER'S PATIO - NIGHT

Hunter, Chloe and Tom around the table, each with a bottled water. Starry sky, crescent moon. FAINT INTERMITTENT CRICKET.

HUNTER: So Tom, do you and Wanda have plans for your twenty-fifth?

TOM: Yessir. Goin' to Hawaii.

HUNTER: Which island?

TOM: Oahu. Waikiki the first few nights, place called Kailua the last few.

HUNTER: Been before?

TOM: First time for both of us.

CHLOE: Are you excited?

TOM: We are. Not so much about the flyin' part but that's just part a the package. I bet y'all been.

CHLOE: I learned to surf on Maui.

TOM: Take a lesson?

CHLOE: My mom.

HUNTER: Wanda don't believe it but I'm plannin' on takin a lesson.

CHLOE: That's cool.

TOM: Figure the worse thatt can happen is me fallin', and I will, but I'm thinkin' it's a lot softer landin' then comin' off a horse. You ever surf, Hunter?

HUNTER: I dabbled when I was a kid.

CHLOR: Dad's a skier.

TOM: Alright. How 'bout you?

CHLOE: Snowboard. We're going to Jackson Hole over Super Bowl weekend.\

TOM: Been there before?

CHLOE: On the way to Yellowstone three summers ago. Dad has skied there.

HUNTER: A long time ago. I'm sure you've been.

TOM:  Me and Wanda did Yellowstone in the winter several years ago, and I had a friend in Wilson I used to visit.  TOM: Well y'all, I hate to be a party pooper but it's gettin' on my bedtime and I need to call Wanda and Ruth. Sure have enjoyed the conversation and hope we can do it again.

HUNTER: How 'bout tomorrow over breakfast.

TOM: That's a date. And Chloe, ya gotta give me the recipe for that casserole to give to Wanda, that was delicious.

CHLOE: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you. And I will.

Tom stands.

HUNTER: I'm right here at sunrise with coffee, Tom, if you're up.

TOM: Another date. Oh, and I hope you wouldn't mind signin' my copy of Foglost.

HUNTER: Happy to. And I hope you wouldn't mind signing the guest book.

TOM: Happy to. Goodnight, y'all, and thanks again for your kindness and hospitality.

HUNTER: Thanks for stopping by.

TOM: Real glad I did. See y'all in the mornin'.

HUNTER/CHLOE: Goodnight, Tom.

Chloe and Hunter watch Tom enter house, leave view.  

Chloe and Hunter watch Tom enter house, leave view. 

HUNTER: If Tom is able and would like to join us, assuming Jackie can wrangle another horse -

CHLOE: Yes. 

Hunter gets phone from pocket, speaks into it.

HUNTER: Jackie.  


[end Act 1]

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